jack-kimball.com
jack-kimball.com

Download PDF here 

THE MONEY


Written by

Jack Kimball and Joseph Citta


jack@jack-kimball.com

919-645-8796


THE MONEY

Logline

Retired guy George finds over a million dollars in a duffel

bag while taking his daily walk. Mayhem ensues.

Cast List - Two sixties couples, George and Evelyn, Rudy and Betty, best friends living nextdoor to each other, inspired by the TV show ‘The Honeymooners’. Blue collar, middle class.

GEORGE - Bored in his retirement. Sees finding the money as his big opportunity

EVELYN - Married to George. The wiser spouse.

RUDY - Married to Betty. George’s best buddy.

BETTY - Married to Rudy. Best friends with Evelyn

COURTNEY - Rudy and Betty’s daughter. Disappointed there is no money for college (never appears and has no lines)

CARMINE - Very young x generation, low twenty-something who works with criminals, maybe the mafia, or maybe just a girl from Starbucks.


ACT I

FADE IN:

EXT. / WALKING TRAIL / DAY

GEORGE

GEORGE, sixties, wearing his walking clothes, is seen on a paved trail in a park.

- He sees a new duffel bag by the side of the trail on his side of a fence.

- He hesitates, walks over

- He peeks in the bag

- He looks around

- He lifts the heavy bag

- He starts walking quickly on the trail from the way he came.

CUT TO:

CREDITS

CUT TO:

INT. / GEORGE AND EVELYN’S KITCHEN / DAY

EVELYN and BETTY, sixties, sit in Evelyn’s kitchen having coffee as best friends. The kitchen is a modest suburban home. There is a door to the garage separating the kitchen from the garage stage right, kitchen stage left.

The conversation is ongoing...

BETTY

We feel terrible about it.

EVELYN

So what happened?

BETTY

(upset, almost teared up)

My Courtney was already accepted at

State... And she...

(MORE)


BETTY (CONT’D)

Ev, she started crying when we told

her there was just no way.

EVELYN

I’m so sorry Betty.

BETTY

It’s pretty bad. If we weren’t so

tapped out on the house.

EVELYN

Oh Betty. Maybe she’ll get a loan or something. But if she can fiqure it out, State is a good place to be till she knows what she wants to do.

BETTY

That’s true Ev, but I just don’t

see it at this point.

EVELYN

George says sometimes things find you; you don’t find them. She should talk to George...

BETTY

How is George?

EVELYN

Bored with retirement...I’m worried

about him.

BETTY

Oh!... I got to go check on the

laundry. Back in a jiff.

Betty leaves through the kitchen door.
George enters carrying a duffel bag.

GEORGE

Sit down honey.

EVELYN

Why? I don’t wanna sit down. I’m

not your employee.

GEORGE

You need to sit down.

Evelyn sits down. Notices the bag George is carrying.


4.

EVELYN

What’s the bag? You shouldn’t be

carryin’--

GEORGE

I found somethin’. I don’t want a

jinx it but--

EVELYN

What? You’re talkin’ crazy George.

George struggles to put the heavy duffel bag on the kitchen table and opens it slightly.

GEORGE

Just look here.

Evelyn peeks in the bag.

EVELYN

(with urgency)

What? Holy Moly!!! Where’d you get

that? Close it up. I don’t want

to see.

GEORGE

Out walkin’. You know where the expressway narrows up to the trail. At the park. You know. At the

park.

EVELYN

Yea...I guess... Best thing is
take it back. It’s trouble George.
Remember Ernie at the race track?
Trouble I’m tellin’ ya.

GEORGE

This is different than that... Let
me tell ya. I saw this bag like it
was nothing. Not my business. But
it was new lookin’. I don’t know.
So I walked over. It like, called
me, I think...

EVELYN

Called you? What are nuts? You
can’t be touchin’ stuff like that.
You never know where it came from.
Who left it.

GEORGE

It wasn’t locked or nothin’


EVELYN

Not locked?

GEORGE

So I opened it quick like. Just a

peek.

EVELYN

There could a been a poisonous snake in it George. You could have gotten bit.

GEORGE

It wasn’t a snake.

EVELYN

I didn’t say it was. I said it coulda been. Julie at book club? She told me somebody’s kid got bit on the leg at the beach. Just walkin’ along. Wham. That was it.

GEORGE

Well, I did open it. The hairs

almost fell outta my head.

EVELYN

There’s not much to fall out

George. You shoulda left it closed.

GEORGE

Funny... I looked around. No one.

EVELYN

That doesn’t mean they weren’t there. You coulda’ been setup. Did you look close?

GEORGE

No one around. I came home. Here I

am. That’s it.

EVELYN

You gotta call the police.

GEORGE

Police?...I was thinkin’ on the way home Evelyn... We gotta think this through; we gotta be smart with this. Maybe if we just lay low. You know, give it some time, then slowly...use a little for bills and stuff. Just think what we could do?


Betty comes back from doing laundry at her house, a few minutes drive, enters (interrupts)

BETTY

Hey George.

EVELYN

(sees Betty looking at the

duffel bag)

George found a bag full a money.

BETTY

Stop your kiddn’

EVELYN

I’m not kiddn’

BETTY

You serious?

EVELYN

We haven’t even counted it yet.

GEORGE

(looking at Evelyn, eyes

big)

It’s SUPPOSED to be a secret Betty.

BETTY

Let’s see.

George opens the bag a little bit to show Betty

BETTY (CONT’D)

Holy Moly!

GEORGE

I know.

BETTY

Did you tell Rudy?

GEORGE

I just came home with it.

BETTY

Well, we gotta tell Rudy. Let me

call em’

Calls on the phone

BETTY (CONT’D)

Get over to George and Evelyn’s.

It’s important.

(MORE)


7.

BETTY (CONT’D)

Love ya’

(directed to Evelyn)
Where’d you find it?

GEORGE

At the park. Just lyin’ there.

BETTY

It’s drug money is what it is.

EVELYN

That’s what I think too.

BETTY

Does anyone else know about it?

EVELYN

Just us.

BETTY

Did you count it? It looks like a

lot. Open the bag George.

Evelyn starts pulling down the shades on the windows. Betty pulls a few one inch thick bundles of money with wrappers around them from the bag and fans the edge of one bundle to see what the bills are.

BETTY (CONT’D)

These are all twenties.

Betty takes out a small black box.

BETTY (CONT’D)
What’s this?

GEORGE

I don’t know. Put it back in.

Betty fans two others bundles of money on the table

BETTY

These are fifties. We should get one of those counting machines. Ya know?

George and Evelyn start fanning the money themselves.

GEORGE

It smells nice. It smells like--

EVELYN

Don’t get ahead of yourself tiger.


The door knocks. Evelyn lets Rudy in.

RUDY

Hey guys. What’s up. You said it

was important?

BETTY

Get ready Rudy.

RUDY

What?

Betty takes Rudy over to the bag. Opens it a little.

RUDY (CONT’D)

Holy Moly!

GEORGE

Holy Moly is right guy.

The doorbell rings.

EVELYN

Who’s that? I’ve got the sign out.

Don’t they read the sign? Excuse me.

Evelyn leaves the kitchen to go to the front door.

RUDY

Where’d you get this?

GEORGE

At the park. On my walk.

BETTY

We need to count it.

RUDY

It will take some time to count

BETTY

Rudy and I can count our half.

GEORGE

Your half?

BETTY

Aren’t we fifty-fifty friends?

GEORGE

I’m not so sure. I’m the one who

found it.


9.

BETTY

We’ll see what Ev says about that.

GEORGE

She didn’t find it either.

RUDY

She’s your--

Evelyn comes in after answering the door. (interrupts hearing end of conversation with Betty and George)

EVELYN

We got caught anyway.

GEORGE

Caught?

EVELYN

The mafia was just here.

GEORGE

What are you talking about?

EVELYN

We had a guy at the door.

GEORGE

When?

EVELYN

Just now.

RUDY

Who? What.

Rudy rushes to peek out the window.

EVELYN

He said he was lookin’ for his dog.

GEORGE

So what makes you think—

EVELYN

I could tell.

RUDY

(from the window)

What did he look like?

EVELYN

He was dark.


BETTY

(Directed to Rudy)

I saw him too. From the window.

GEORGE

You mean he was a black guy.

EVELYN

No. Dark.

RUDY

You mean Italian?

BETTY

Italians aren’t really dark.

EVELYN

He might a been though Betty.

GEORGE

Did he have an Italian accent?

EVELYN

No. A black tee-shirt. You know. It

fit REALLY well.

RUDY

Could he a been Middle Eastern?

They’re dark.

BETTY

Middle Eastern people aren’t dark.

They’re olive.

GEORGE

Olive? What’s olive?

BETTY

It’s the trees. Beautiful people.

RUDY

How can it be the trees? Middle Eastern people are not green. Olives are green. What are they, from Mars?

BETTY

You’re just jealous.

RUDY

I’m not jealous! Why would I be

jealous?


BETTY

Because you’re Scott. The Scotts

are pasty; like you.

RUDY

Pasty!

EVELYN

It’s the sun Rudy. It rains all the time in Scotland. It’s not your fault really.

GEORGE

Can we just get back to the guy?

EVELYN

Well, I think he might have been

from New York. Maybe from New York.

GEORGE

Did he have a car?

EVELYN

He had those skinny jeans like they

wear.

GEORGE

Skinny jeans?

EVELYN

Yea. You know. Nice fit. I could

tell when he walked away.

Evelyn makes the shape of a man’s butt with her hands.

GEORGE

That’s great Ev... But all you really know is he was wearing a

black tee shirt and skinny jeans?

EVELYN

Something else.

GEORGE

What?

EVELYN

He was swarthy.

GEORGE

Swarthy? Christ...


BETTY

Those Italian guys look like that

Ev.

EVELYN

Plus he said he was lookin’ for his

dog. A golden lab.

RUDY

You lost me. What does him having a dog have to do with being in the mafia?

EVELYN

It wasn’t the dog, he was really

talking about the money, get it?

GEORGE

How do you know he was talking

about the money?

EVELYN

(making quotes in the air

in George’s face)

He said the “dog” was close to

“puppies”. If we found the “dog”

he’d give us a “puppy”. So there

you go.

BETTY

Dogs are a big responsibility Ev. Mattie has that Chi Poo. She and Jeff can’t go anywhere. Plus they’re still stugglin’ with the paper training. We already went through that once with the kids. Never again.

EVELYN

I know Betty. Plus you never know unless you get the dog from a pound, someone licensed ya know. They could be diseased. Even a flu cross over. Next thing you know, wham, just like that. You’re dead.

BETTY

They’re cute though.

EVELYN

And they do bring love to th--


RUDY

Excuse me girls... What does him

giving us a puppy have anything—

EVELYN

It’s a metaphor Rudy.

RUDY

A metaphor?

BETTY

(directed to Rudy)

It means he’s really talkin’ about

somethin’ else honey.

RUDY

(directed to Betty)

I know what a metaphor is darlin’.

GEORGE

Maybe he was just lookin’ for his

dog?

EVELYN

You’re dreamin’ George.

GEORGE

Did he say how many “puppies” he’s

expectin’?

EVELYN

What a ya think? He gave his dog an

ultrasound?

RUDY

(sees something outside.

Goes to the window)

Well, whoever it is, is standing

back there in the woods looking at

us.

George, Betty, and Evelyn rush to windows.

BETTY

Lord. He looks just like DeNiro in

his prime. Look at that hair.

EVELYN

(at another window)

More Pacino than DeNiro Betty.

GEORGE

Now he’s smiling at us. I think he

sees us.


14.

RUDY

He’s a sneaky lookin’ bastard.

BETTY

That’s a DeNiro smile Ev if I’ve

ever seen one. My goodness...

RUDY

He’s leavin’

BETTY

He’ll be back and murder us for

sure.

GEORGE

We need to count the money Rudy.

EVELYN

Well, not in my kitchen. Money is crawlin’ with germs. Maybe even the COVID! You boys go count the money somewhere else. Out!

RUDY

Come on George. We can count it in

my garage. I’ll drive.

George and Rudy make exit to leave with the Bag to go to Rudy’s garage, a two minute drive (maybe a mile).

GEORGE

I was just on my walk and...

George and Rudy exit, drive off, and Betty and Evelyn remain in the kitchen

EVELYN

It’s a lot of money Betty. I still

think we should call the police.

BETTY

It’s better if the boys agree Ev...

This thing is already a mess.

EVELYN

Do you really think it’s drug

money?

BETTY

Maybe. It could also be marked I guess. Don’t they mark money like that? Record the serial numbers and stuff?


15.

EVELYN

If it’s a bank or something I

guess. Do you think it’s stolen?

BETTY

I saw something like that on TV.
Stolen money. The bank got it back
though. The money exploded now I
remember.

EVELYN

No way... Wait. Could that be what that black box was? Some kind of, I don’t know...

BETTY

My god Ev. On 20/20 the robbers were really hurt...It’s a bomb Ev! The box is a bomb. It could blow up on the boys. I’ll call ‘em!

Betty speed dials her phone to call Rudy. Then Evelyn tries to call George.

BETTY (CONT’D)
Voice mail!

EVELYN

Me too!

BETTY

Let’s take my car. Now!

Betty and Evelyn run out of the house

CUT TO:

EXT. / GEORGE AND EVELYN’S DRIVEWAY / DAY

Betty and Evelyn jump in Betty’s car.

CUT TO:

INT. / RUDY AND BETTY’S GARAGE / DAY

Rudy and George are counting the money. They pull out the black box, glance at it, ignore it, and set the black box aside

They dump a huge pile of money on the work bench.


16.

RUDY

Ok. Let’s get organized.

GEORGE

(Fanning some bundles)

Holy mother. Some a these are
hundreds.

RUDY

Ok. You count a bundle. Then I’ll

count a bundle. See?

George picks up the black box, stares at it, turns it around, then sets it down.

CUT TO:

EXT. / GEORGE AND EVELYN’S DRIVEWAY / DAY

Betty’s driving. Betty swerves all over the driveway and backs the car into a ditch at the end of the driveway. (Betty does not have the skills to back up the car).

The girls jump out of the car and start running to Rudy and Betty’s house.

CUT TO:

INT. / RUDY AND BETTY’S GARAGE / DAY

GEORGE

(Starts counting.)

One, two, three ... fifty fifties.

That’s twenty-five hundred.

Rudy writes it down.

RUDY

forty-eight, forty-nine, fifty.

All twenties That’s a grand.

Rudy writes it down. The pile grows.

GEORGE

Ok, I get fifty C-notes. Get that

down.

Rudy writes it down.

GEORGE (CONT’D)
Another fifty.


17.

Rudy writes it down.

GEORGE (CONT’D)

Put the bigger ones in one pile

George picks up the black box and shakes it next to his ear to see if there’s any noises.

GEORGE (CONT’D)

Looks like I could open this...

CUT TO:

EXT. / STREET ON THE WAY TO RUDY AND BETTY’S HOUSE / DAY

SLOW MOTION: Betty and Evelyn are running like crazy up the street. DRAMATIC MUSIC

CUT TO:

EXT. / CLOSE UP OF THE TWO GIRLS IN SLOW MOTION / DAY

SLOW MOTION: Close up of Betty and Evelyn’s face as they are running with panicked expressions. DRAMATIC MUSIC

CUT TO:

INT. / RUDY AND BETTY’S GARAGE / DAY

RUDY

Ok, if each of these piles is fifty times fifty then that’s twenty five hundred, plus the hundreds each are five G piles.

GEORGE

What do you mean hundreds. I said

those piles are C-notes.

RUDY

A C-note is a hundred.

GEORGE

It’s a fifty.

George gets more curious about the box. He picks it up above his head and looks at the bottom.

CUT TO:


18.

EXT. / STREET ON THE WAY TO RUDY AND BETTY’S HOUSE / DAY

Betty and Evelyn are in sight of the garage totally out of breath.

CUT TO:

INT. / RUDY AND BETTY’S GARAGE / DAY

GEORGE

Well... I counted em as fifties.

RUDY

You didn’t. Tell me you didn’t do

that.

GEORGE

(glances to Rudy while

examining the box)

I did

George and Rudy stare at each other

GEORGE (CONT’D)

Do we know ABOUT what it is?

RUDY

Sure

GEORGE

(looking at the box)
What’s this button?

RUDY

Ok. Pack up. Let’s go back.

Rudy hits the garage remote and the overhead door starts to come up.

CUT TO:

INT. / CLOSE ON OF GEORGE’S FINGER HITTING THE BUTTON / DAY

SLOW MOTION: A closeup shot of George’s finger starting to push the button

CUT TO:


19.

EXT. / IN FRONT OF RUDY AND BETTY’S GARAGE / DAY

Betty and Evelyn are right at the garage. The overhead garage door is opening up from the bottom. A BIG EXPLOSION IS HEARD and red colored dust rolls out from the bottom.

The garage door rolls up. George and Rudy are standing there covered with red paint and looking like exploded cartoon characters (unhurt). Paper money is floating in the air.

GEORGE

Girls?

EVELYN

Are you ok!

RUDY

It’s one-million three-hundred and

fifty thousand.

GEORGE

And change.

FADE TO BLACK.


END OF ACT I


ACT II

FADE IN:

INT. / GEORGE AND EVELYN'S KITCHEN / DAY

EVELYN (ON PHONE)

She’s here now. They’re in the

garage.....

BETTY (ON PHONE)

Rudy told me she’s a fence. They

can get rid of the money.

EVELYN

I don’t think so. Are children in the Mafia? Besides, George says it’s not illegal to find money just

lyin’ around....

BETTY

But the paint thing Ev? What about that? Rudy’s still scrubbin’ by the way.

EVELYN

My George is to. He scrubbed and scrubbed. He could get the SEPSIS I think. His whole body could rot, slow like, you know. Wham.

Dead.....

Or worse. I mean--

Oh. They’re coming back with that girl. Call you.

George and Carmine enter the kitchen from the garage

CARMINE

Did you set off the dye pack? A good third of the money is ruined. You know that right?

GEORGE

Uh... It was already like that. You

can’t fence it or what?

CARMINE

I didn’t say we couldn’t offload

it, I said it would be complicated.


21.

GEORGE

How hard can it be? Just spread it

around.

CARMINE

Synchronized bills are not easy.

You can get caught.

George and Carmine sit down at the kitchen table. Evelyn is at the sink.

EVELYN

Can I get you something to drink

sweatie?

CARMINE

I’m ok. Thanks though.

EVELYN

How old are you? You look like

you’re twelve.

CARMINE

(offended )

I’ll consider that a compliment.

GEORGE

So how much can you give us?

EVELYN

(interrupting, staring at
Carmine)

I don’t want to be rude but is
Carmine your real name?

CARMINE

It is.

EVELYN

Isn’t that a man’s name?

CARMINE

It can be for a guy or a girl...

Look George. Finders fees are ten
percent. Clean money.

GEORGE

Ten percent?

CARMINE

Sure. You found it. You get a

finders fee. Rudy didn’t tell you?


22.

EVELYN

It’s a gangster name isn’t it?

It’s not your real name right?

GEORGE

Ten percent? No way. I’ll just

spend it slow.

CARMINE

Look. You seem like nice people. My
associates and I don’t want any
trouble. But you brought us in
now.

GEORGE

And I can bring you out.

CARMINE

Not really.

GEORGE

You’re out.

CARMINE

We’re in.

GEORGE

Out!

CARMINE

In!

GEORGE

If I don’t want you in, you’re out.

CARMINE

Listen. Tough guy. You don’t know

what you’re dealing with.

Carmine reaches to George and yanks a tuft of hair out of his chest.

GEORGE

Ouch! Shit!

Carmine then blows it in his face.

EVELYN

(from the sink)

What happened!?

GEORGE

She pulled hair otta my chest!


23.

EVELYN

What!? You bitch!!

Evelyn rushes over and grabs Carmine and starts pulling hair out of Carmine’s head. Carmine fights back.

EVELYN (CONT’D)

Don’t you be messin’ with my
George...Listen you dumb bi...

They fight more and then Carmine breaks away.

CARMINE

Alright! Alright! Alright!

GEORGE

You started it.

EVELYN

Get outta here you, you... x-

generation slut baby!

CARMINE

(angered)

At least we didn’t ruin the world

like you baby boomers!

EVELYN

So now that’s our fault?!

CARMINE

Here’s the deal! Put the money on
your front porch by morning. If
it’s not there my assocites will
take over.

EVELYN

Associates? You mean you and the

other kids?

CARMINE

Put the money on the porch or else!

GEORGE

It’s time for you to go.

CARMINE

I’ll go. And I’ll be back with my

people. You boomer creeps.


Carmine get up and leaves. George and Evelyn remain.


GEORGE

They’re not gettin’ the money. I’ll

die first.

EVELYN

Oh George.

The doorbell rings. Evelyn lets Rudy and Betty in.

RUDY

(wearing EXTRA tight jeans

and TIGHT black t-shirt)

So how’d it go? Everything go good

with Carmine?

GEORGE

Not so good Rudy. How’d you find

this Carmine?

RUDY

A guy I knew at Cup a Joes knew a

guy. You know.

GEORGE

Did she say ten percent finders

fee?

RUDY

Uh, yeah, maybe, but that’s just

negotiating right?

GEORGE

Ten percent Rudy, or else.

BETTY

What does ‘or else’ mean?

GEORGE

It means we shoulda’ spent the

money slow.

RUDY

Slow. We’re not gettin’ any younger

George.

EVELYN

And we may not be gettin’ any older

Rudy.

GEORGE

I think we should blow town.


EVELYN

Blow town? We have grandkids
sweetheart. You can blow town
yourself.

GEORGE

You shoulda checked references

Rudy.

BETTY

(directed to George)
Back off on Rudy.

RUDY

She didn’t have a resume. What do

we do now you think?

GEORGE

Uhh...If I have to settle for ten percent, you get nothing. I’m the one that found it.

BETTY

That’s not fair George. We’re fifty

fifty friends. Evelyn?

GEORGE

You two get otta here!

EVELYN

I think we should take it to the

police.

RUDY

(mad bcause he’s been cut

out)

Police? No way. It’s a lot of

money. Even spent slow. This ain’t

over George. Come on Betty! We’re

leaving.

GEORGE

See ya buddy boy!

BETTY

I’ll call you Ev.

RUDY

(directed to Betty)

No you won’t!

Rudy and Betty leave.

George sits at the kitchen table. Evelyn is at the sink.


26.

GEORGE

We’ll just spend it a little at a

time.

EVELYN

What about Carmine?

GEORGE

...This was our chance.

EVELYN

So what do you think we should do?

GEORGE

...I think we should move. With the money we can change our identity. The grandkids can still visit.

EVELYN

(touches George tenderly)

Why don’t you sleep on it?

GEORGE

(pushes Evelyln’s hand

away, spoiled, like a

child would)

Yeah?... Are you on my team? Is

anybody?

George goes in the garage. Evelyn sits at the table. George comes back with the full duffel bag.

GEORGE (CONT’D)

I’m gonna take a drive.

EVELYN

When will you be back?

GEORGE

(stubborn)

I don’t know. Maybe never.

George leaves, stomps out. Evelyn puts her head down on the kitchen table like she’s crying.

FADE TO BLACK.


END OF ACT II


27.

ACT III

FADE IN:

INT. / GEORGE AND EVELYN'S KITCHEN / DAY

Evelyn is on the phone near the sink. She’s feeding a Golden Lab puppy as she talks.

EVELYN

(to puppy)

You’re a cute little thing...

(to Betty on the phone.)

I think we’re good. They said
they’d come by.

The doorbell rings

EVELYN (CONT’D)

Hold on. I think that’s them now.

Evelyn sets her phone down on the kitchen table, goes to the door off camera.

CUT TO:

INT. / EVELYN IS AT THE DOOR AT GEORGE AND EVELYN’S HOUSE / DAY

EVELYN (O.C.)

(can’t see who she is

talking to but CAN see

she takes an envelope)

Oh. Thank you. I appreciate you

coming by.

Evelyn returns and gets back on the phone.

EVELYN (CONT’D)
That was them...

Evelyn looks out the window.

EVELYN (CONT’D)

Oh. George just pulled in. See you

later.

Evelyn hangs up.

George enters the kitchen, doesn’t say anything and sits at the kitchen table.


28.

EVELYN (CONT’D)
Are you talking?

GEORGE

Yea. I’m talking. What’s with the

dog?

EVELYN

Pets are good to have around.

GEORGE

If it makes you happy.

EVELYN

You’re being nice.... You were gone

all afternoon. Where were you?

GEORGE

Just around. Thinkin’... It’s a lot of money. Money like that could

change our lives.

EVELYN

Our life is so bad?

GEORGE

You know what I mean. I coulda’
bought you things. Things you
always wanted.

EVELYN

But it’s more than that isn’t it
George? Maybe things for yourself
also?

GEORGE

Yea...but there’s something else.

EVELYN

What George?

GEORGE

I thought about it. Hard.

EVELYN

You did?

GEORGE

...I took the money to the police.

George turns and faces away. From his body language he is depressed.


29.

EVELYN

Oh.

Evelyn looks at George, then slowly goes behind him and pulls out the envelope she has been hiding and takes out a check and places it on the table in front of George using both hands.

GEORGE

(George sits with his back
to the camera very

depressed. He takes a lot
of time to notice the
check, pick it up, look
at it intensely)

....What’s this?

EVELYN

It’s a check George.

GEORGE

I can see that? It’s made out to
the both of us. Fifty-thousand.
Fifty-thousand dollars. Why--

EVELYN

You turned in the money but you

didn’t know.

GEORGE

What?

EVELYN

The police called after you left
the station. There was a hundred-
thousand reward George. The money
was lost in a kidnapping.

GEORGE

A kidnapping?

EVELYN

The family got their son back but
not the money. They weren’t rich or
anything.

(a long beat for George to

think.)

George gets up from the table and goes to Evelyn. He hugs her.


30.

GEORGE

I just love you. That’s all I
thought about when I left. I
couldn’t stand it. Losing you
would... Will you forgive me? I
don’t know what I’d do... Why...

They kiss.

EVELYN

(flustered on love)

Go sit down silly. You’ll give
yourself a heart attack.

(a long beat.... George

continues to hug Evelyn,a
special moment of two

people in love)

Now go change. Rudy and Betty are picking us up. They want to drive down Campus Drive to check it out on the way to The Chophouse.

Courtney starts class this fall you know.

GEORGE

Rudy and Betty? Why-- The reward
was a hundred? We gave them the
other fifty right?

EVELYN

And wear a jacket. We’re

celebrating. Like always, it’s
Dutch treat, fifty-fifty George.

George and Evelyn leave the kitchen to get ready for going out, in love.

FADE TO BLACK.

THE END